Saturday, September 15, 2012

A Painter's Dream Comments

Rating: 4.3

It was midnight as I painted
The voluptuous figure of a long-haired woman,
Calmly lying on her death-bed with closed eyes,
Trying to remember her days of lost love,
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Indranil Bhaduri
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Florence L Chhangte 06 November 2015

Reminds me of the poem The Darkling Thrush

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Florence L Chhangte 06 November 2015

Reminds me of The Darkling Thrush

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Rajesh Thankappan 16 January 2015

So sad to see the love die a silent death! I also invite you to read my poem ' The painter's work' whenever you find time.

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Ramesh Rai 21 October 2014

A beautiful with soothing and imagery expression. Love your ink.10

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Amitava Sur 07 June 2014

A lovely imagery with the illusion......

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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2014

Lovely imagination and a lovely poem.

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The poem has wonderful imagination and circumstances explained in detail. experienced as good.

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Yash Shinde 05 April 2014

..a classic portrait of dreams and illusions............

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Shania K. Younce 18 March 2014

This poem has wonderful imagery. Bien!

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V P Mahur 13 March 2014

Dear Indrani, Your poem is full of sorrowful note deep agony is appearing like a movie. Great effort. I invite you to read my poems and tell something about them. You can Try this one: 'Spring Tells' The clear sunny spring Is now approaching Leaving behind The severity of The shivering cold sting The leaves and flowers Are appearing With a sweet smiling ........................... ............................. Thanks!

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Meena Mustafa 26 February 2014

A very descriptive write... thanks for sharing

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A passionate poetic portrait of dreams and desire!

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Crystal Conrick-knight 09 February 2014

wow that was intense. I like the twist of writing its similar to my own.

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Patricia Grantham 25 July 2013

Painting a picture of a woman lying on her death bed must have been a very eerie task to do. I cant imagine this being an easy for at all for the painter. It takes a very artistic person to carefully transfer brush strokes to canvas in a setting like this. Was this someone an object of his affection? Very thought provoking.

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Yasmin Khan 12 July 2013

The dream is painted in dark and grim colours very poignantly.

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Sun Shine 12 July 2013

homework shows through.nice

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Rituparna Sen 23 June 2013

Awesome composition..

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Wahab Abdul 20 May 2013

lovely..thoughtful and artistic.too..love it

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Neethu Prasanna 16 March 2013

Oh Excellent! ! ! ! Top marks

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Kaila George 11 January 2013

He was pouring his heart out onto the canvas...how wonderful.

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Indranil Bhaduri

Indranil Bhaduri

Kolkata, India
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