A Painful Love Comments

i feel free; what a nice poem

Nicely composed the pain. Love it

nice poem, well wrtitten, keep writing those beautiful poems.

was true good done

I read this poem, and it talked or made me feel so much of what I feel in this relationship I am in. The pain, the hoping someone can see, but perhaps it isn't to see because it isn't meant to be. Someone once told me if you have to work at something too hard or much, then perhaps it is not worth it or wasn't meant to be. Sometimes though the things or the people we love just don't know what tey are missing or perhaps it is their lost. Enjoyed your writing as always.......as always-you inspire me.

Donna, You convey your pain beautifully. If your story is biographical...have the courage to make changes that move you to happiness and bring you peace. Remember, 'Great changes are the result of great courage' Warmest Regards, Ray

orsum poem i really liked it nice to see that somebody else is puting NEW poems into this site xoxo amber