Tuesday, June 20, 2006

A Pain Worse Then Love... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have just found out that love isn’t the worst pain
its hurting the one that with, I once ran through the rain
my big sister I have lost and hurt which is killing me
this isn’t the way it should be
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Michelle Guza
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Chelsi Ruffing 16 September 2006

Michelle you know I love you and will always be here for you no matter what any one says or does. You will always be in my heart. Your poems are coming along great. I am so proud of you! I love you LIL SIS<33 love big sis chelsi

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Catastrophe King 05 August 2006

A REALITY poem.... you have used your words so well; this is a good read! I pray you meet your sister/friend again and she gets to read this beautiful composition.10/10.

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BEAU GOLDEN 02 July 2006

That was profound. It is hard to convey how much it hurts. great work.

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