Wednesday, September 19, 2012

A Pain To Clear To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see the pain in this world
The pain of ages so far away
I see the pain of lives been twirled
The world's too much for them today
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John Dillenger II
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Logan Paul 19 September 2012

Thank, You... But as I pace behind the door I come to find pacing a bore lost in the drone of beating steps and of the times i've cast my nets to get the true catch of a life even if it comes with strife her love of which i wished to bear now slowly dies without her there and as this fragile life is fleeting so does the drum of my heart beating ring proverbial in the air our love dies without her there.....

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Indranil Bhaduri 19 September 2012

Incredible writing sir....

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