Sunday, September 18, 2011

A Pain Comments

Rating: 4.3

Noiseless break of nerves
You find many life curves
Little you speak but
Never you speak it.
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abhimanyu kumar.s
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Marvin Brato 13 December 2017

Meaningful piece...10.

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Apurva Jain 21 July 2012

lovely........! ! ! ! ! ! ! : D

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Ramesh Rai 15 June 2012

Tree of forest and street Free at one lonely at another.

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Joshua Crumpton 22 April 2012

Great poem, nice choice of words

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Sossi Khachadourian 26 March 2012

Blood and breath, life and death yes that's the real life my friend! ! 1 Good poem i like it!

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Carl Carl 14 March 2012

Good poem I like it... you should read and comment on my few poems about suffering, pain, and depression.

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Karen Deeks 09 March 2012

A real decent piece and my favourite line is (Everything happens patiently) thank you for sharing... Karen :)

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Raghvendra K 23 December 2011

good nicely written.....

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Divya Divya B 16 November 2011

pain which is noise less and everybody will face without any noise

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Luvo Mjayezi 15 November 2011

I love the poem, but I hate rhming in genral. you have a very on point yet fragmnted way of saying thisngs. it makes your poems a very interesting and a bit challenging to read, whic is really good in my books.

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grame peele 03 November 2011

yes it is true pain is always noiseless. love it

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lover of poetry sweet 13 October 2011

you have a good sense of words for your feelings sir

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Amir Forougi 27 September 2011

Very highly expressive poem well rhymed...

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Mansoor - 26 September 2011

your poem is good but I think it is a bit perplexing. Try to express your Idea a little more illustrative and commonly.

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Ponniah Ganeshan 21 September 2011

Life is like that. No one can escape from pain and you have to face it. Good poem.

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Amartya Kalapahar 20 September 2011

Very nicely written.

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