Noiseless break of nerves
You find many life curves
Little you speak but
Never you speak it.
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Blood and breath, life and death yes that's the real life my friend! ! 1 Good poem i like it!
Good poem I like it... you should read and comment on my few poems about suffering, pain, and depression.
A real decent piece and my favourite line is (Everything happens patiently) thank you for sharing... Karen :)
pain which is noise less and everybody will face without any noise
I love the poem, but I hate rhming in genral. you have a very on point yet fragmnted way of saying thisngs. it makes your poems a very interesting and a bit challenging to read, whic is really good in my books.
you have a good sense of words for your feelings sir
your poem is good but I think it is a bit perplexing. Try to express your Idea a little more illustrative and commonly.
Life is like that. No one can escape from pain and you have to face it. Good poem.
Meaningful piece...10.