Saturday, January 10, 2015

A One-Sided Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

She saw him first working at the stairs
He looked like an angel from the sky above
In wrinkled clothes with deep blue eyes
She stood like a statue staring him even when he was gone
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Nishi Kumari
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 20 March 2018

A beautiful portrayal of sad love, dear Nishi, so well crafted. Make a series of poems on this theme please. It would thrill, amaze and inspire man6 of your fans like me. 10+++ for the lovely sharing. Thanks. Subhas

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Chinedu Dike 03 February 2017

Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth in good diction with insight. Thanks for sharing Nishi.

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Nishi Kumari 09 February 2017

Thank you so much for your valuable comments..

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M Asim Nehal 11 August 2016

Nicely written Nishi, One sided love is really difficult to describe since it only reflect feeling of one person leaving other in doldrums....Nice one again 10

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Nishi Kumari 27 August 2016

Thank you again for your motivational comments

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 22 January 2015

Her heart missed a beat and the unspoken love thrilled her from within She bades goodbye and runs to catch a cab A wonderful poem about human behavior where love culminates at a strange note.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Ayushi Verma 19 January 2015

I liked the positive attitude. And this happens with most of the people at some point of time. keep it up! ! ! Nishi: -)

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 January 2015

'her sprouting seeds of aspirations' I like this line: the Spring of her soul.. then common life takes its own drive.. Life is hard on many of us, isn't it? Thanks for sharing, Nishi

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