She saw him first working at the stairs
He looked like an angel from the sky above
In wrinkled clothes with deep blue eyes
She stood like a statue staring him even when he was gone
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Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth in good diction with insight. Thanks for sharing Nishi.
Nicely written Nishi, One sided love is really difficult to describe since it only reflect feeling of one person leaving other in doldrums....Nice one again 10
Her heart missed a beat and the unspoken love thrilled her from within She bades goodbye and runs to catch a cab A wonderful poem about human behavior where love culminates at a strange note.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
I liked the positive attitude. And this happens with most of the people at some point of time. keep it up! ! ! Nishi: -)
'her sprouting seeds of aspirations' I like this line: the Spring of her soul.. then common life takes its own drive.. Life is hard on many of us, isn't it? Thanks for sharing, Nishi
A beautiful portrayal of sad love, dear Nishi, so well crafted. Make a series of poems on this theme please. It would thrill, amaze and inspire man6 of your fans like me. 10+++ for the lovely sharing. Thanks. Subhas