Friday, August 17, 2012

A One Night Stand...Wish I Could Have Lasted Comments

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I finally got to taste the sweet nectar I've long to reach
For all others it seemed to come easy… The moment was there and in a panic I failed
My mind went blank I wasn't all there… My heart began to rush and stop
I didn't remember what I was supposed to do, Everything I wanted to try
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Olivia Braun
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Kelly Seale 17 August 2012

oh, how your heart breaks, your words reveal heartfelt moments that you only hoped for, and as would have it, your love, your feelings, were left outside his door. Slamed shut, unable to face to face, your regret, only that he was not the right one as you thought. Now, you question yourself, and wonder if the next time will be what you hoped and dreamed of, ... will there be a next time? A next one? Maybe, not anothe One Night Stand. A one man band... You can hear the drums beat... no wait- that's your heart! -Very nice write Olivia! Very raw and naked words, exposing your vulenabilities, and emotions. Great Ink! ! ! -Kelly.

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