Tuesday, April 13, 2010
A Oldie Don'T Go Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Good night good night ye, old man
Come to see me fast if you can
I may be leaving you far behind
Don’t try for me ever to find
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7/28/2025 2:43:46 PM # 1.0.0
The big problem here is that the verses stand alone. There is no coherence in the message as a result. There was an ending but it wasn't very good. The rhymes were fair in most cases but because the verses were not connected this was harder to read than it could have been. This might be a fairly nice poem with more time and work but I can't recommend it now. --- Greenwolfe 1962