Tuesday, March 30, 2010
A Nudge To Marry Comments
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I won’t simply marry
As you have failed to carry
You failed to make me merry
You were impossible and funny
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My Angel My Love My Soul My Life
30 March 2010
WOW ur really good ........i dont even kno how to describe it but i like it
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7/29/2025 4:40:36 AM # 1.0.0
You seem to have trouble with your 'Eastern' attitude toward women. You may be demanding something from her that she doesn't understand, which causes your impressions of resistance to your love. It is simpler not to ask for love but rather give love. If it is done with reverence, it will be returned without conflict. As for the poem itself, you are struggling with the language...especially rhyming. You also changed point of view from speaker to observer...this is a rather severe fault.