Tuesday, August 19, 2008

A Nudge From The Wind Comments

Rating: ★4.0

funneling rain by my window
knocks on my door i don't know
open curtain to watch the palms
they are still whatever comes
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Manonton Dalan
fishing soothing
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Pacific Hernandez 01 November 2008

A good poem. I like the rhyme. a 10 for this.

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Stacey Watts 28 October 2008

Very well written piece. I enjoyed it.

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Callie Carroll 15 September 2008

A light and playful poem. I enjoyed it.

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Susan Jarvis 28 August 2008

Your poem is a linguistic painting of a magical landscape - a little ray of sunshine to light the day. S :)

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Edith Oram 24 August 2008

Visual and lighthearted, I like this poem, well done.

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Pied Piper Berry 22 August 2008

I read joy, lightheartedness, and and expression of freedom into this poem. A good read. :)

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
Manonton Dalan
Manonton Dalan
virginia, usa
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