Sunday, November 8, 2015

A November Morning Comments

Rating: 4.9

A cool November morning!
Today I rose much earlier than usual
I watch the night stealing away
Like an accused convict under cover
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Valsa George
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Dutendra Chamling 25 November 2015

'A November morning' has light for day. Beautiful.

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Souren Mondal 22 November 2015

No feeling is perhaps as majestic and wonderful as watching the sun rise.. I loved the way in which you placed an image after another with vivid but aptly chosen detail to give the readers a 'feeling' of the morning... Simple images with similies.... And the poem ends with the beginning of a new day.. An awakening of the day and maybe one's soul too (perhaps I am reading too much into this) and that is the most beautiful thing about this poem, in my humble opinion - the ending is the beginning... A beautiful poem ma'am... Thanks for sharing...

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Daniel Brick 22 November 2015

This poem is not only a beautiful evocation of time and place; it is also gorgeous. Gorgeous is an aspect of the beauty which emphasizes the ABUNDANCE of desireable qualities so that the viewer is stunned, overwhelmed. That's how I felt as the poem unfolded and the day woke up. But your presence in the scene is quiet and appreciative. You are not overwhelmed but are enjoying with poise a free moment before the day begins in earnest

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Akhtar Jawad 16 November 2015

The December noon is ahead, so make preparations to welcome it in November morning, cold is painful for the old, but the clever humans know the art of making every season a spring! Liked your November Morning and started waiting for the December noon. Expect a poem from you on a December noon.

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Savita Tyagi 14 November 2015

Enjoyed this lovely morning scene. October and November present the most beautiful and serene mornings. Reading few of your poems and limericks made my morning great. Thanks for sharing Valsa.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 November 2015

Sweetness of the morning is so enjoyable. Your poem makes it feel like I am there in your surroundings. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Sanjukta Nag 10 November 2015

Though I read the poem at night, but the touch of your beautiful words make me envision a serene morning at this hour of darkness. Thank you.10+

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 10 November 2015

A lovely poem as beautiful as a November morning. (10)

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 10 November 2015

Lovely verses. Your pen flows with the beauty of nature as you see it. And as I read line after line, every word etches a painting of what you perceive. Every description to glorify the seeping dawn is so brilliant. Every unique expression to note down the fading night is rare. Your great sense to observe, to feel, and create each line so beautifully, is remarkable.

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Jaishree Nair 09 November 2015

An early november morning morning so poetically penned.I enjoyed the imagery.It brings a vivid picture into our minds. Thanks

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Loke Kok Yee 09 November 2015

wish I can watch a sunrise like this I can't because I wake up late thanks Valsa

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Kelly Kurt 08 November 2015

As I read, I experienced the sunrise with you. Thanks, Valsa

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2015

Rising much earlier in cold November morning is definitely special. Observing the leaves of grass are misted with dew are interesting with this enjoyable imagery shared here. Life begins unfold slowly with special attitudes. Nice and interesting poem shared with wise vision....10

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 08 November 2015

We enjoy watching a poet beautifying a morning, be it November or December or any other number, using all the decors she possesses. Wonderful very inspiring, indeed.

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