Sunday, October 28, 2018

A: Notepad Comments

Rating: 4.5

The death of you, dad, is everywhere.
I fill oceans with it as I touch your face -
Semi-cramped by its rising up.
This is one place no one swims
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Susan Williams 06 November 2018

Incredible poem. Thank you for sharing this- -very nicely done. 10++++++++++++++++

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 28 October 2018

I LIKE THIS POEM.IT IS SO NICE.

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Chinedu Dike 28 October 2018

Well conceived and nicely crafted from the heart. A beautiful eulogy written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heart. Thanks for sharing Bladerunner.

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Dave Walker 28 October 2018

A very touching and emotional poem. A great write.

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