A Note Over Coffee! ! Comments

lol very nice write....so you left with the waitress? hahaha. A sad note a warm ending. keep writing!

I have to read anything with 'coffee' in the title when I need one. This sure didn't disappoint! Film-scipt-ish indeed.... excellent. t x

Hiaq Geoff, I guess I know who youre talking about, I think! lol, well written sentiment, Lisa

I like your fantastic imagination it reminded me of an old American film! Love your style Karen

Hi Geoff, thanks for your comments, inquistively I took a peek at yours..... how very good this one is. I like your biography, I too write however it flows. I shall read some more of yours now. HG: -) xx

Carried on the winds of change and finding new horizons together Awesome treat Love duncan X

Funny how things work out when you least expect them to....serendipity...perhaps. Nicely written Geoff! Hugs, Dee

Beautiful poem, it flowed and rhymed easily and keep you wondering... nice write. ~Salir Airosa

Wonderful paced and metered work.Loved it! TO

Sir Geoff....I Like it! Great storyline....very creative'''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

Guess I need to get a job as a waitress! Fantastic story Geoff!