Friday, February 3, 2006

A Note On Suicide Comments

Rating: 4.1

It isn’t brave, and it isn’t clever,
to inflict pain on other people forever.
Life isn’t all about you.
Your life isn’t all about you.
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Dan Brown
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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

oops! .....continued: ...'might' reconsider suicide, decide against it, AND 'live happily ever after'....if there IS such a thing (as 'living happily ever after' something) . bri : )

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 February 2024

Think again about your selfish suicide! You may not be a good husband, you may not be a good wife. You may not be needed by many rich people but you can at least help a person who needs your help. You have not created this life so you can't destroy it.

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Bharati Nayak 16 February 2024

A person who thinks his life is full of darkness, need love and positive inspiration.This poem is inspiring to desist from suicidal attempt.Who says it is not effective in any way to stop suicide?

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Bharati Nayak 16 February 2024

Suicide is a tricky issue.A suicidal person need support of family, friends and society as well.He /she need proper coucelling.(Part-1)

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

Bharati, seeing your comment in PH's Notifications brought me to this poem and I've replied to every comment I've seen below. My friend, (ha ha) use an 's' after 'need'. I totally feel it would be nice if all suicidal people had good counsel.

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D.S. Bell 08 February 2022

It is of my opinion that suicide is a two-sided coin. Torchure works both ways.

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D.S. Bell 08 February 2022

Torture * meh can't edit it seems: s

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

It seems, D.S., that you caught your 'error', and it is 'better late than never'! ! ;))))

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Margaret Blanchard 23 September 2020

Though it is a mere opinion, I believe that this poem is true to an extend that I cannot begin to express. The fact that you recognize that it affects the people on the outside as well as yourself if truly astounding. Death is inevitable, it is true, but when you die and how is up to you. Understandably some people commit suicide because of their situation, but there is always a chance of redemption.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

I think it is basically (but not always) selfish to kill another person before killing onoeself. Things vary from person to person & from situation to situation in many instances, not just on the subject of suicide.

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erect 13 September 2020

All lives have no meaning so if someone kills themselves there isn't a reason to care what others think. Selfish or not, death would come to them and those around them anyways. Everyone dies at some point. The universe is infinitely older than our life span and anything you say, do, etc., has absolutely zero purpose.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

'ERECT' WHAT? ? ? This is truly an interesting comment, and it MAY contribute little if anything to anyone. ; ( Maybe erect is 'making a joke'? ? ? ?

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Carli 14 November 2018

I wouldn't hate this but you called people who commit suicide or plan to commit suicide selfish. Calling a suicidal person selfish makes them feel like, they already feel down and calling them selfish is just horrible. So you've had experiences, it doesn't mean everyone else feels like you, it doesn't mean you understand their minds personally. Calling a suicidal person or someone that has committed suicide selfish is trash.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

I think 'trash' is a pretty good word to use. bri : )

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Lucy Lincoln 14 November 2018

Putrid words from a putrid “human“. You have no soul. Nothing but a vile troll. Shame on you.

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Ellen 13 September 2018

I think this is an incredibly selfish, closed minded poem. You have no idea do you.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

Think what you will, Ellen, but I THINK YOUR THINKING IS 'BULLSHIT' AKA 'FULL OF HOLES'. That said, I would never suggest 'suicidal people' should keep those thoughts totally to themselves! ! !

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Laura 17 July 2018

It’s a difficult situation because there are so many people you won’t bring with you..but then

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

It's difficult for some I'm sure, but I don't think it is (always) fair for a person to REALLY 'bring' others alond to Death by killing them as well! ! ; (

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Uglysnowhite 20 March 2018

Dont build your defense by telling them selfish.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

Hey,

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

Hey, 'Ugly....', Here is the apostrophe for your 'Don't'. Here: ' ' '. You can keep it. I like your PH name...I think. ;)

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Abby_ 12 February 2018

It is true that people will die with you.. but i dont see suicide as selfish. I see people. People who are miserable, and scared. They don't want to deal with their life. They just want to be set free.

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Jimmy 09 December 2017

Its not selfish. Your doing it for yourself.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

You, Jimmy, have agreed with me, but....you also 'made' two typos: Use 'it's', not 'Its' for 'it is'. And use 'You're', not 'Your', for 'You are'. ;) bri

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sammy 19 November 2017

What if there is no one at all you are leaving behind what if you are all alone in this painful world....could it mean more reasons to end your life

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

Yes, I COULD. : )

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Roseann Shawiak 16 October 2013

If you can't fight the light at the end of the tunnel, write it into poems, as many as it takes to ease your thoughts and let your feelings be experienced through poetry. It helps to know that others think about it too, maybe your poem will touch and help someone step back from the edge long enough to find another way through life's injustice.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

Well said, Roseann. ;)

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Tahnee ? ? ? 11 December 2006

what if you cant find that light at the end of the tunnel?

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

Use your flashlight, Silly.

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Kt Allen 05 December 2006

I really liked this poem, it's not the only option out and im sure you know that. It will hurt others, but people have to think about who they are leaving behind! good poem kt x

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

'I'm' for 'I am', not 'im', ...please! ! ! : )

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Mary Ali 29 November 2006

Truly amazing Dan. you just renderd me speechless.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

'good' or 'bad' speechlessness? ? ? ?

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Alex Giblin 07 July 2006

There's some truth to it, granted, but you oversimplify the issue of suicide. Perhaps suicide is blind, selfish, stupid, all of these things, but, regardless, do you believe that any suicidal person would - upon reading this poem - reconsider anything? Come to some sudden understanding? Make the decision not to kill themselves? This poem, to me, is merely scathing. Christ, you're mocking the poor people; kicking them while they're down. The viciousness of the poem, its snide tone, achieves nothing - if anything, you'll leave the suicidal feeling more wretched.

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

WOW, well said! ! ! In fact, though I'd probably tone down my criticism of this poem, [[ I'd actually give it five (5) stars for PRESENTATION, poetically & grammatically, . ]] bri : )

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

I believe much of what you, Alex, say is NOT an UNreasonable way to comment, but I say you go OVERBOARD in your totally critical outlook. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 16 February 2024

(cont.) A suicidal may well aka

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