Wednesday, June 24, 2009

**a Note In Blue Comments

Rating: 3.0

Standing under a sun mellowed
My feet stood still
Pausing at will
Relishing the sand's
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Deva De Silva
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Yelena M. 25 June 2009

'Relishing the sand's Sheer wanton silk Recalling footprints Erased long ago...' A touching silky poem in colours of blue and melancholy...Your poems have a solid quality to be 'printed' in the mind of a reader. Beautiful.. A.

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