Wednesday, March 7, 2012

A Note Full Of Scribbles.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can't roll on the bed,
when the feeling gets on.
Touch that part,
that plays the tart.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Prasanna Kumari 22 July 2012

good poem bringing to mind the two sides of many things...

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Rajendran Muthiah 09 March 2012

The best example of obsecure poetry. For it, we look for; but it happens suddenly. It is hidden. When it is frankly said, it does not appeal. Well written poem.

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Ramesh Rai 08 March 2012

V.S. really very effective.I do realise you are gifted with wonderful feelings. a nice poems full marks.

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Raj Arumugam 08 March 2012

It captures well the ever-changing moods and swings of human feelings, VS...very effective

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