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Cry not young poet...'much to do about nothing' William shakespear...a place where you visit...not sleep

great expectations may lead wether to great joys or dissapointements...a well composed poem

What you expect and what you get tells you great expectations is not the golden rule for some your words cloud the meaning of simplicity...good effort regards

I like the use of dialoge and conversation...not bad.

The disappointment has been so greatly portrayed here....

Great poem.

thanks for sharing.... your pen writes good

A lovely poem about disappointment based on expectation.Good write...I'll check out other poems you listed.

Expectations makes the difference. Good flow.