Thursday, April 3, 2014

A Nonet Sonnet Comments

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I don't want frantic orgies out of time
with loose limbed couples making love a mime.
I just want you to fill my loving arms
for no one else exceeds your gentle charms
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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Patricia Grantham 07 April 2014

Very passionately written. I love your style here. Words are powerful and seductive but very expressive. Great work Thomas.

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Danny Draper 05 April 2014

Sonnets do not have to adhere to strict formulaic observance. This is a fine write of love, passion and a lover's gently persuasive entreat.

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