Wednesday, May 3, 2023

A No Moon Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moon
Fell into the pond..
Lily laughed for fun
But moon got shaken
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Indira Renganathan
COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 August 2023

An amazing and entertaining poem crafted with beautiful imagery.Liked the opening stanza.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 04 May 2023

Very much interesting. Lily laughed innocently. Moon shouldn't have been that cruel. Nice story poem

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Ricky M 03 May 2023

A fascinating tale of moon and lily.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 May 2023

love the ending it was wonderful

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M. Asim Nehal 03 May 2023

Excellent poem. When lily Began to stoop Feeling sad for the Moon in hide....Great imagery.5*****

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 May 2023

A fantastic poem dear madam....loved it. Top score and to my favourites.

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