Wednesday, September 25, 2019

A Nightmare Of Night Comments

Rating: 4.0

The banished night by the poetic hands
Letters come as moonlit in the writing
Window curtain is dancing by slim breeze
Silent all over with nightly darkness
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Akhtar Jawad 07 October 2019

I am punished by my nightmares and rewarded by my sweet dreams. A thoughtful poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 October 2019

Like climax of a movie scene, good imaginative write. From Poet's Notes I note that you are also present on Poetrysoup. I too am there, though I don't visit too often, let us meet there as well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 September 2019

Nightmare of the night! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rus Mer 29 September 2019

many times such master pieces comes to your imagination faculty...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 September 2019

REST I SHALL READ LATERLY

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 September 2019

Me and ''PEN'' busy in ploughiING the (brain) ? ? ? ? field A fist slog (an) ON comes with the breezy tone LOVELY METAPHORICAL NIGHTLY IMAGERY WE ALL LOVE IT YOU KNOW MB OF BD VERY NICE AND LOVOLIE POETREE LIKE FALLING APPLES FROM A TREE U HAVE STOPPED READING ME WHY MB UNHAPPY?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2019

True poetically versed, Mahtab. Excellent imagination and boldly worded. Thank you for sharing this nightmare with us. Excellent poem, must I say. A 10 Full Score.

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 25 September 2019

A thrilling experience. Beauty of excellence. Good poem indeed.

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