A Nightmare Comments

I found the theme really peculiar and interesting, yet as a poet myself I had to be critical in looking to that. I could not get through the line where you say, 'Is what they mean dear what they book? ', would you please explain what do you mean here. I think you want to ask that do they really mean to do what they are claiming? the next thing was u used some words like 'Trooth' and 'Trow'. I found the word 'Troth' meaning a solemn pledge or a vow, but the aforementioned words were not found in dictionary, so are these any slangs which I'm not aware of? Please if you can clarify. Otherwise, the peom was wonderful, especially I like the way it comes to an end. Hope to see a response from you.

A real pleasue to to have read the poem

An excellent poem written in the backdropp of growing terrorism in Pakistan. Full marks to the poet.