Wednesday, September 20, 2006

A Nightmare? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ralph had a horrible nightmare
In which a demon was chasing him
But when he told his friends at the pub
They just laughed and said, 'It's only a dream'
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Raul Castelan 07 June 2007

My gosh, that was really captivating to read. I didn't even see it coming. What a way to have had a nightmare, really. This is another one them that I've never come across in my life. GOOD READ! ! !

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Alison Cassidy 20 September 2006

Marilyn, Great narrative with a twisted finale which I like. I enjoyed this one. Warmly, Allie xx

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Scarlett Treat 20 September 2006

Speaking of the hair on your neck standing up! This was a really eerie one, and I loved it!

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Jimmy Watkinson 20 September 2006

Very thoughtful. I like the open ending, it allows the imagination to try and formulate its own ending. Clever indeed. jw

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