One night
I found myself standing by a shore
A door was there for me to pass
I stepped in and reached a land so strange
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A good poem with nice flow and in attractive style.your description and presenting the surroundings are remarkable. I like this poem because you opened the both doors Sorrowful and joyous that seems to me the tides of life.
the flow is nice...though i would have a bit more rhyme...for easing it! but let me hastily add...it flows smooth as a brook...and i know how we feel, there... the theme is so contemporary and current...you Have done a great job in bringing the demons out of the dark dream... there is indeed a deeper meaning in your lines....i am sure the discerning eyes will pick it... well done and beautifully said.. keep going...GOD speed..! sat... :)
A well penned and poignant write full of imagery! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...
this is one of best poems i have ever read here. So real.