Saturday, June 25, 2011

A Nightmare Comments

Rating: 5.0

One night
I found myself standing by a shore
A door was there for me to pass
I stepped in and reached a land so strange
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Ebi Robert 02 December 2011

this is one of best poems i have ever read here. So real.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 03 July 2011

A good poem with nice flow and in attractive style.your description and presenting the surroundings are remarkable. I like this poem because you opened the both doors Sorrowful and joyous that seems to me the tides of life.

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Saadat Tahir 28 June 2011

the flow is nice...though i would have a bit more rhyme...for easing it! but let me hastily add...it flows smooth as a brook...and i know how we feel, there... the theme is so contemporary and current...you Have done a great job in bringing the demons out of the dark dream... there is indeed a deeper meaning in your lines....i am sure the discerning eyes will pick it... well done and beautifully said.. keep going...GOD speed..! sat... :)

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Abdallah Gamal 28 June 2011

What a wonderful poem I liked it so much cheers :)

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Romeo Della Valle 27 June 2011

A well penned and poignant write full of imagery! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Ace Of Black Hearts 25 June 2011

Another brilliant poem, you are better think keep at it.

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