A Nightmare Comments
Darkness falls upon the land.
The night, silent and so dark.
Creatures make noise from their habitats.
I claw into my bed, its time to sleep.
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'The soul is willing to fight but the flesh is paralysed.' took me where you wanted me to. brilliant. Not easy easy to grasp the whole poem but yet can say it's not only the dream but also the real life situation where you stuck and unable to express yourself. great poem. loved it.
It is the best description of a nightmare I've ever read. The line I liked best was 'And my rapid eye movement is in a hurry.'. Only thing is I wish it could've gone on a little while more. Great work. :)
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7/26/2025 8:59:46 PM # 1.0.0
you do such a great job of really putting the reader there visually and emoting feeling. i'm scared right now! :)