Tuesday, August 21, 2012

A Nightmare Comments

Rating: 4.5

A storm in a teacup
You said me, 'The die is cast! '

I hoped a chance to know earlier
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Eindaray Kyaw
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Nader Baheri 09 July 2013

nicely penned in flowing lines~nb

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 22 January 2013

this is lovely with good rhymes. loves it.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 September 2012

Good rhyming.

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Duran Jose 12 September 2012

Well done using 2 line stanzas the rhythm is great

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Sunny Rose 04 September 2012

The 2nd stanza is beautiful

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Zero Ro 22 August 2012

You just need to ignore whatever if you are intension for this person true. If not, it is worth to do.

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Eindaray Kyaw

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