Wednesday, December 2, 2009

A Nightmare Comments

Rating: 4.8

When the lights turn off,
My eyes softly close,
And a nightmare terrifies me.
It brings all my fears,
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Lindemberg Pereira da Silva
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Zaynab Elzain 14 July 2010

i like it , i hope if i can just wake up and find that my life is all a nightmare too, love this poem thnx for writing it

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Diana Ferrer 19 January 2010

I agree, the 'is that the real thing' after the tension of the nightmare and relief of realizing it wasnt real to doubting what is real, has a good impact =)

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Emma Kessler 09 December 2009

It sounds wonderful Lindemberg! I love 'It was just a nightmare, Or is it the real thing? ' Your English is almost perfect. It's an enticing read.

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