Monday, October 24, 2011

A Night With Aphrodite's Breeze Comments

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A cold breeze crept to my window
Over my windowpane dropping its tears
With some begging words i can see her cry
Saying: let me in, I'm not a breeze
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hosny Soliman
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Unwritten Soul 21 November 2011

Soft and gentle as it breathing on skin you write it so nice...I like the feel of the poem, it surfacing my feeling with peace words...Hosny, i can see how you learn to pick the subject very well here..it's in your imagination..Very nice writing, like it with smile :) _Unwritten Soul

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