leave me to my silence
and I will leave you to your laugh
leave me to my darkness
and I will leave you to your past
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wow that shares wat i feel inside that noone cares not even a little....great masterpices....
A poem evoking a wonderful moment in time well done Ben Karen
I've always believed 'good things come in small packages' and that holds true here. An excellent write.--Thankyou--Melvina--
A very touching poem Ben I really liked this one. Short and concise it still managed to convey a great emotion in it. Keep it up!
Awww this is a lovely poem ~ it seems you to can capture alot in just a few sentences too! =) I love the mention of 'silence' and 'darkness' ~ are you a fan of Sylvia Plath? ~x~Sarah~x~
Hi Ben. I thought your poem was great. Good work. JoAnn