Wednesday, September 27, 2006

A Night Spent Unalone Comments

Rating: 4.9

leave me to my silence
and I will leave you to your laugh
leave me to my darkness
and I will leave you to your past
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Ben Partenay
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JoAnn Mahoney 21 November 2009

Hi Ben. I thought your poem was great. Good work. JoAnn

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Evaughn Gray 08 June 2007

wow that shares wat i feel inside that noone cares not even a little....great masterpices....

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Karen Clements 05 January 2007

A poem evoking a wonderful moment in time well done Ben Karen

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Raymond Wright 27 October 2006

Great poem, Ben. So few words, so much said. ~Ray.

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Melvina Germain 14 October 2006

I've always believed 'good things come in small packages' and that holds true here. An excellent write.--Thankyou--Melvina--

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Steffi Webster 11 October 2006

A very touching poem Ben I really liked this one. Short and concise it still managed to convey a great emotion in it. Keep it up!

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Sarah Capella Smith 02 October 2006

Awww this is a lovely poem ~ it seems you to can capture alot in just a few sentences too! =) I love the mention of 'silence' and 'darkness' ~ are you a fan of Sylvia Plath? ~x~Sarah~x~

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Leria Hawkins 28 September 2006

Very nice poem. Short and sweet. I really enjoyed it.

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