- A Night Song - Comments

Aparnaji, today you are once again recognised and placed at #79 among the Best Member Poets on PoemHunter. Congratulations. All the best

Dear Suratha, Thank you for your review. I'm a woman, not a man, so please don't call me 'Sir'.

The poem 'A night song' is a love poem. Beautiful creation. Thank you sir for sharing.

Thanks Robert and Narayanan Kutty for your positive reviews.

A lyrical write of a night song. Well expresed.++10

It is a hope of finding her love at night long solitude. Wonderfully written.

A song of love, A song of pain, The winter sunshine And the summer rain

Dear Dev, I've read some of your poems. They are nice :) You are welcome to share your poems on Boloji where I publish poetry. Cheers Aparna

Dear Piyush, Subhas and Dev Anand, Thanks for your appreciation of this composition.

beautiful love poem. desires, wishes, love and romance., love your poems. dev. please read my romantic poems if time allows..... i write only sensual and romantic poems. dev.

I enjoyed reading the lines Nights like this are Lonesome and Long Wish you were here To sing me a song. What a stanza it is! Some smiles to cherish, Some tears to weep, Memories together For us to keep. I am stunned at the beauty of this poem. Thanks a lot poetess. Keep the voyage on dear poetess. It deserves 10.

a poem for togetherness. nice rhymes. lovely.

Dear Mishra Ji, Glad to read your review. Thank You :)

Sweetness and tenderness so softly spoken. Thanks

Dear Hardik, Vipins, Braja and Palas, Thanks ever so much for reading and reviewing.

We all live in moments. But how well we live in it is the root of the matter. When a poet lives a moment in absolute self mode, with nothing but the poet per Se, no other accompaniments, pure and sheer self he or she lives her cosmic signature tune, which unlike the stars and thankfully so, is different for every moment, but specific to the poet. I think in this poem you lived your signature tune, you were in unison with your true self. I liked this poem Aparna, and again some how or the other I get the scent feminty in your pen, and it has nothing to do with gender, but the fundamental nature of ones soul. For example this poem could only have been written by a feminine soul. A man has no chance to think of it.

If thou wert a rose in that vale I'd love your rubious petals As I've opal eyes like a sparrow For shall I sing a song An unsung song of my soul For sweep away all your sorrows With the flutter of wings like a gale! ! A g'd poem! ! ! !

Simple but beautiful...