A Night Sky... Comments

I agree with Victoria, that this is a wonderful piece of poetry. The use of language here is particularly good. The rhyme is good too. This was fine to read and worthy of being recommended to others. GW62

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! that was amazing ive never read anything like this its wow. i give it 100% an im gana add this poem to my fav.

I think that you really put yourself into it.... I can really relate to the imagery behind it.... Superb job! With all the best, Katerina

Ya know.. I only have one question... do you think Mom is ever gonna be ready to give you up? Cause that kind of talk can really get to a girl... The beauty in words can only be created by a beautiful person.. and you, my dear nephew, are one absolutely beautiful person! ! Keep up the awesome work hun... cause we need all the beauty in this world we can get. Love ya!

I gave you a 10 although it doesn't do any justice to a truly poetic mind! This was the most awesome poem I've read in a while. It also shows the romantic side of such a wonderfully talented young man. Love ya!

Beautiful write, son... interesting, I found that while reading this, it gave a very satisfying, kind of primal feel to it, and was not sure if the narrator was human or animal... the genius is, is that the poem can be taken either way! I enjoy the fact that you revel in nature's beauty and incorporated your senses of sound and sight to heighten that...10 plus to my fav poet! MA.

that was so beautiful..it gives you a peace of mind it makes you think of all the wonders in the world.your such a good writer..~hazel