Wednesday, January 28, 2009

A Night Prayer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark sentinel of the ways:
My heart has given to the strange;
This ache of sadness torments my days
When I am lost of all your change.
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Barry Van Asten
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Larry Bulot 28 January 2009

Oh wow! gorgeous poem. Very few people write this way any more. I enjoyed the way you rhymed with out forcing or compromising your message! ......10

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