Evening casts early shadows in December.
As dusk falls heart is filled with longing,
I have an appointment, I suddenly remember…
Quickly I put on my coat and stockings.
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Mamtaji, you have great affinity with nature; u get easily inspired to go eloquent with verses........When a poem takes the reader to the ambience described and makes him part of it, feeling it, enjoying it, I think it is a very good poetry. Your poems have all those ingredients, surely and sufficiently. Thanks for this great poem/
a well rhymed poem of nature, telling the poetess skill
Mamta, this poem is beautiful, I have taken it's perfume with me to breath in its heady delights on more than one occasion. Bob
This poem is a gift from a fragrant December night. It's so romantic that the poetess seems to be the Queen of the Night herself.
heavenly fragrance- when i was a little girl in india i remember collecting those flowers for my grandmother for the morning puja. It had to be only from the tree and not from the ground lovely write Mamta +++++10 as always anjali
wonderful to read..nicely written for a December night...10 Ency Bearis
This romantic piece has it all, the magic of the moonlight, the fragrance of exotic flowers, and, finally, a warm embrace. An exceptional December night indeed. Beautiful, Mamta. Love, SandraX
it appears as if you carried the intoxicating fragrance of Rat Ki Rani right into your house! good poem...gives pleasant reading...10
The queen of the night fills the night of grace..........beautifully written. Shabas Mamta!
'May that warm embrace be with you both by night and day, - and the night of grace get extended into a life of grace! ' - Raj Nandy
A mind filled with emotions Has its own grace... at day or night Nature, flower, moon, sun, palnet, sky, .... And what not... With which we can drive away the commotions. Good read indeed.
A sweet an eloquent poem, 'intoxicating' an delightful to read! Best wishes Mamta! *10*! ! Friend Thad
wow... you're so awesome