A Night Of Disire For One Lovely Spider Comments

one character of female spider is when they have'careless whisper' she kills the male...ok, , my commnt goes this way...this is nicely presented, , a life of human played by arachnida..very nice..so nice..

hehe....silly spider Luvvvvvvvvvv it

a very unique poem but very very good -Tyeas

An interesting read Randy! appropriate name too it seems! lol I enjoyed both aspects of his tale of oops! A daisy I did pick, just too quick. A lesson learned I hope. She didn't mean to eat him all up, I'm sure. Smiling at you, Tai

a beautiful poem of spider and love. I also hated spiders until i read a story of that king-Robert Bruce and from that day till now if I see a spider i sit and watch the fella for hours maybe. lovely +++++10 as always anjali

lol! ! ! ! ! ! randy...........how did u think of this.................i hate spiders but i know i seem to like them teeny weeny bit.........very well penned........

Moves like a spider...laden with webs of love..love never dies till the spider dies.Good writes my bro Randy.

I liked it...very original

Wow! ! ! You have a wonderful imagination.........Beautiful work, It was amazing.... Keep writing