Saturday, August 21, 2010

A Night Mood Comments

Rating: 4.4

The moon reddish color looms through horizon's fog
In the dancing mist the hazy meadow sleeps
By the green lush a reptilian creature calls his mate the frog
There where a shadowy movement stealthily creeps
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Nero CaroZiv
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A B Faniki 14 October 2019

Great imagery and well crated. Thanks for sharing. Geat write

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Ratnakar Mandlik 30 September 2019

Enjoyment of the night by different aspects of nature's manifestations narrated wonderfully making the poem worthy of poem of the Day. Congrats.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 September 2019

superbly written the silence of night //// Silence the night with the mild dark, harsh dark not on the woe, rue, foe row by row, step by step the silence immersed into the ultimate den of heart.....

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Chinedu Dike 30 September 2019

An insightful piece of poetry well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Nero.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 September 2019

Water flowers fold their petals round In the distance tall and in close array Yellow willows outline their shadowy forms to the ground And towards the dark thickets the fireflies stray. what a fine poetic description. tony

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James Mclain 30 September 2019

Great poem full of eye dazzling information. Thank you in this a fine effort. James McLain 🎸

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 September 2019

A very nice poem full of promise and hope. Enjoyed thoroughly. Congrats.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2019

Oh vast and tender universe sky An appeasement seems to lower From the firmament star-adorned Let us love, let us dream It is the hour of glamor sheen......touching expression. Beautiful poem on love and dream is astutely delineated. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the POD.

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Dominic Windram 30 September 2019

Great imagery...great poem...congratulations! ! !

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 30 September 2019

The poem on night is full of life.

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Chandan Dey 30 September 2018

The silence of the night is beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Chandan

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 September 2018

A very nice poem about all the dramas taking place at night. Enjoyed thoroughly. Congrats.

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Harley White 30 September 2018

An excellent poem... lyrical and evocative from start to finish...

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 September 2018

Divine moment! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kim Barney 30 September 2018

Congratulations, Nero, for having this poem selected as member poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 September 2018

Nero, such a wonderful poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen....10++++++

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