A Night Letter Comments

A lovely piece of writing. The use of language is so well worked through. The narrative seems to be one that you have worked hard at and it has paid off well. I love how the poem celebrates itself from a great opening line onwards. It seems like it is addressed to a particular person and then that intimacys seems aimed at the reader. This is such a clever use of the form. It is well balanced and you avoided a naivety that would destroy a poem of this type in the hands of a juvenile whose first language is English. Absolutly captivating!

Attractive, lyrical accent … I congratulate … 10!