A Poem for the Two of Us
I went in search of LUCK today.
I looked first in my apartment.
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Perhaps LUCK is not a thing we can hold, even mold into what we think we need. LUCK is rather a mood that friendship creates and sustains. It is not an event, it is a series of actions that promote joy and hope.- - -
hey, daniel! i like this one. one realistic detail especially stands out to me—" a tree swelled out of the shadows" —excellent! i've experienced this. in the first verse likening the dusk sky to a persian carpet also stands out to me. a suggestion, i think this poem would do better without the last stanza which seems, to me, somewhat uncharacteristic of you. -glen