Last night she walked into my world,
her touch so soft, so sure,
last night she reached across the mile,
and whispered such sweet a word,
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This is very nicely writte...the feeling comes across so well... Thanks for sharing this poem...
absolutely beautiful. I loved it! ! ! .....wonderfully written! ! !
This is emotionally grand, just divine.....How wonderful for both....Gives one hope that perhaps there can be A Night that will last Forever, as you say, even if miles and miles are between the two...Sounds good to me......marci. :)
Hauntingly beautiful...a poem full of Love which makes the world go around.Another emotion packed read which puts a glow in the heart and lets you know Love or something like it can still reach across the miles....it has no specific time nor place. Excellent work Geoff 10/10 =Shelley=
A confident, flowing, enchanting piece. t x
Wonderful poetry about love, I like the rythm and it is so peaceful as if you whispered those words, beautiful Geoff. xx
Your a very beautiful writer Geoff, I love your poetry. Very romantic. I love romance. Take care.
a good poem written with a lot of feeling. nice work