Thursday, May 29, 2008

A Night, By Your Side Comments

Rating: 4.5

Waves, the words of these untiring seas
Writing an endless poetry in your beauty’s praise.
Stars, the night earth’s replacement for birds
In your blanket to match hues in your soporific eyes
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Putholi Arumugham
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i like this poem is really good

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Concetta Neville 13 April 2009

Wow, this was very good. very sweet to read.10+

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Meena Iyer 17 December 2008

Tender romance! lovely work!

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Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2008

'Waves, the words of these untiring seas Writing an endless poetry in your beauty’s praise' these first two lines give a robust kicking start for this beautiful romantic poem...the style more or less mine! very much enjoyed... congrats, arumugham! ten for you

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Cora Lee 30 May 2008

Wow. I love this poem, your an amazing writer. Simply beautiful. It gives of a wonderful image to me. Great everything =] 'Stars, the earth’s replacement for birds' amazing line by the way. =].

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Nadushka Delrio 30 May 2008

It's lovely. I really like the ending.

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Loving Hate 30 May 2008

wow, its so beautiful. ur an amazing writer.

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Rani Turton 30 May 2008

Well-written with sensual imagery that borders on the romantic. The phrases have been very well-coined, so that the emotion of the moment gets through to the reader.

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Lynda Robson 30 May 2008

A very passionate poem, I enjoyed reading it, well penned, Lynda xx

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Serenity Prayer 29 May 2008

awwww. i like it. its kool and cute.

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i ke this poem..very deep....plz comment some of my poems..thnx.

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Kay Hollister 29 May 2008

This is a very wonderful poem. I rated it a 9 for you. there was one thing i found wrong with this poem, but it is still very elegant and as you said to mine, moving. the problem i found was, the part where you talked about the unconsious moans, it seemed like you wanted your poem to be of love and joy, but that part made it sound like the person was depressed. Other than that the poem was of beauty.

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Lorene Kinsey 29 May 2008

'by your side to take notes of your unconscious moans' I like this line, lost in pleasure, without inhibitions, with someone completely attentive. I would be impressed to see you take this line and paint the senses surrounding it with words.

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Ashley Burnam 29 May 2008

I think this is very well writen and i like it as far as poems go. Work on the flow for this one though. Have fun writing: 3

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Joseph Poewhit 29 May 2008

Paints a beautiful picture

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