A Night, By Your Side Comments

i like this poem is really good

Wow, this was very good. very sweet to read.10+

Tender romance! lovely work!

'Waves, the words of these untiring seas Writing an endless poetry in your beauty’s praise' these first two lines give a robust kicking start for this beautiful romantic poem...the style more or less mine! very much enjoyed... congrats, arumugham! ten for you

Wow. I love this poem, your an amazing writer. Simply beautiful. It gives of a wonderful image to me. Great everything =] 'Stars, the earth’s replacement for birds' amazing line by the way. =].

It's lovely. I really like the ending.

wow, its so beautiful. ur an amazing writer.

Well-written with sensual imagery that borders on the romantic. The phrases have been very well-coined, so that the emotion of the moment gets through to the reader.

A very passionate poem, I enjoyed reading it, well penned, Lynda xx

awwww. i like it. its kool and cute.

i ke this poem..very deep....plz comment some of my poems..thnx.

This is a very wonderful poem. I rated it a 9 for you. there was one thing i found wrong with this poem, but it is still very elegant and as you said to mine, moving. the problem i found was, the part where you talked about the unconsious moans, it seemed like you wanted your poem to be of love and joy, but that part made it sound like the person was depressed. Other than that the poem was of beauty.

'by your side to take notes of your unconscious moans' I like this line, lost in pleasure, without inhibitions, with someone completely attentive. I would be impressed to see you take this line and paint the senses surrounding it with words.

I think this is very well writen and i like it as far as poems go. Work on the flow for this one though. Have fun writing: 3

Paints a beautiful picture