Tuesday, March 3, 2009

A Night At The Roman Gates Comments

Rating: 5.0

The third and the last fourth quarters, made no sound at all
The first and the fourth parts built up a sound upon an old wall
There were scaffolds of gold, traces of all riches beside the fallen towers
It’s the first night at the Roman gates: the last finders are counting the lost hours
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Diana Van Den Berg 12 March 2009

I am slowly returning to the present... you had me spellbound, hanging on every word, every picture, every detail, every thought. You truly understand that history is vibrant and real and full of as much detail as life in the present, but only really brought to life by storytellers and poets of excellence, such as you. I think it is a great idea to start a collection of poems about history - and what a magnificent title! 'Unbound' as in an unbound collection of poetry, but also as unlimited in its scope and detail!

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An interesting, intense set accurately described. People are waiting for something..

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