Sunday, February 8, 2009

A Night At The Cafe Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking by
It's nighttime out here
Elvis Costello and the Attractions are performing ' Everyday I Write The Book ' on my Ipod
It's been a great day so far
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Justin Gildow
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Christine Schmidt 23 October 2009

This was edging on prose, I liked it. Reference to ipod and such very dating...the end is what really got me-nice ending. It takes me back to leaving a bar in Minneapolis, alone-no one to escort me to my car-scary at times.

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Barry A. Lanier 16 February 2009

Justin I enjoyed the suspense of the journey you carried this reader on, , , I was disappointed in that I was hoping you'd connect...with the waitress...thanks for sharing Hope you get to peruse some of my work in that I need critiques from more seasoned writers...hoping to publish soon

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