If you have some place
Some place you could well spare
Make a niche for me in your heart
To warm me within your space
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Mercifully there are poets who write something that has substance and emotion adnd their poetry can be enjoyed. How do we at 'Poets of Delhi' invite you to our readings? .
I would be part of your present....I love this line, Rani. And mind you, this is not a silly piece.This comes from a very loving and sweet heart.. Hugs from here, Meggie
silliness renders more sweetness once one is in love...
Dear Rani, I do like this one of yours! It touches my heart! Congrats from Brasil! Sílvia
its thruogh dreams we realise what we long for, a sweetlove poem, expressing the longing for a loved one.
how i wish you could be in my heart rani. excellent piece.
A very very cosy warm niche in someones heart you just built, Rani. Nice imagery of a nice weird place for living, while we love someone.
This is so sweet Rani, written from your heart, thank you Lynda xx
All poetry are mostly product of imagery.This one too is good combination of imagination, words and emotions.Not at silly.good one
May be this is one of such Most aspired spaces Where dwell seems to be A great gain, a solace. Not a house, no lock and key The cost is not known But seems exorbitant. A niche, ever and ever Poignantly craved for Never known to happen. Delicately engraved one. Enjoyed it. Thank you.
I did not feel it silly, it is full of dreams and it emerges from aspiration, good feel in those lines, very expressive, well done
Rani... have to agree.. do not belittlest.... niches are what make locks and keys in life fit together... (ok enzymes as well I suppose) ....
Please do not question your authentisity, your words are beautiful Love duncan X
Not silly at all, truly written from one heart to another. I loved the simplicity in your request. Lovely. HG: -) xx
There is many a niche in many mens hearts for a sweetis like you and I bet you walk in their dreams to big ten for a nice warm poem Chris
rani, a place already warm is ready here... you may move in and make it warmer! a poem sweet and luring…
Who says it is silly…it is as beautiful as a dream………….and when accomplished it will be great…this niche for love will always last…a soothing poem… **Abha**
Enjoy the way you write. I am sure you would like mine - Sonnet Beyond Love - Adeline