Tuesday, May 6, 2008

A Niche For Me In Your Heart Comments

Rating: 3.3

If you have some place
Some place you could well spare
Make a niche for me in your heart
To warm me within your space
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Rani Turton
COMMENTS
Adeline Foster 02 September 2011

Enjoy the way you write. I am sure you would like mine - Sonnet Beyond Love - Adeline

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Ravinder Malhotra 06 December 2009

Mercifully there are poets who write something that has substance and emotion adnd their poetry can be enjoyed. How do we at 'Poets of Delhi' invite you to our readings? .

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Meggie Gultiano 25 July 2009

I would be part of your present....I love this line, Rani. And mind you, this is not a silly piece.This comes from a very loving and sweet heart.. Hugs from here, Meggie

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Indira Babbellapati 16 January 2009

silliness renders more sweetness once one is in love...

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Sílvia Oliveira 08 July 2008

Dear Rani, I do like this one of yours! It touches my heart! Congrats from Brasil! Sílvia

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Mamta Agarwal 08 July 2008

its thruogh dreams we realise what we long for, a sweetlove poem, expressing the longing for a loved one.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 18 May 2008

how i wish you could be in my heart rani. excellent piece.

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Onelia Avelar 17 May 2008

A very very cosy warm niche in someones heart you just built, Rani. Nice imagery of a nice weird place for living, while we love someone.

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Lynda Robson 16 May 2008

This is so sweet Rani, written from your heart, thank you Lynda xx

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 16 May 2008

All poetry are mostly product of imagery.This one too is good combination of imagination, words and emotions.Not at silly.good one

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Vidi Writes 11 May 2008

May be this is one of such Most aspired spaces Where dwell seems to be A great gain, a solace. Not a house, no lock and key The cost is not known But seems exorbitant. A niche, ever and ever Poignantly craved for Never known to happen. Delicately engraved one. Enjoyed it. Thank you.

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Rema Prasanna 10 May 2008

I did not feel it silly, it is full of dreams and it emerges from aspiration, good feel in those lines, very expressive, well done

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Emancipation Planz 08 May 2008

Rani... have to agree.. do not belittlest.... niches are what make locks and keys in life fit together... (ok enzymes as well I suppose) ....

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Duncan Wyllie 07 May 2008

Please do not question your authentisity, your words are beautiful Love duncan X

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Original Unknown Girl 07 May 2008

Not silly at all, truly written from one heart to another. I loved the simplicity in your request. Lovely. HG: -) xx

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Priyanka Shetty 07 May 2008

i loved this poem...... keep writing like magic....... :)

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Broken Peaces 07 May 2008

There is many a niche in many mens hearts for a sweetis like you and I bet you walk in their dreams to big ten for a nice warm poem Chris

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Kesav Easwaran 07 May 2008

rani, a place already warm is ready here... you may move in and make it warmer! a poem sweet and luring…

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Abha Sharma 07 May 2008

Who says it is silly…it is as beautiful as a dream………….and when accomplished it will be great…this niche for love will always last…a soothing poem… **Abha**

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