A New You. Comments

Really enjoyed your poem and gave me food for thought. Thank you.

A lovely poem Fay, puts you in a good mood to start the day.

This poem started relieving me of stress within moments of reading the first few lines! ! ! ! ! This poem shoulkd be bottled! ! ! ! ! !

The words give a new energy to face life.good work.

New York, not ole York.. A walled city versus an open space.

Definitely a great poem to make One person to feel good about living a peace filled life! ! ! :)

Envision your new rescued heart Which nothing can invade. This place to go when things are hard Will transform you, when once you start The New You is a transformed edition of the previous You, a completely different one. Nice idea, beautifully put. So 10 for it and an invitation to my page, Thanks dear Fay. Subhas

hey ya there Faye! have a lot of pieces missed from you ehhhh? Thumbs up for the unfading Faye Slimm!

Envision your new rescued heart Which nothing can invade. This place to go when things are hard Will transform you, when once you start To value what you've made. This is the part i like most and can relate to Every body wish for a place to go to when thing are hard n the place where everyone seek sanctuary is different and the place where u go when things are hard is the place where u can be u n no one will say anything bad bout u. I think what i want to say is if there is a sanctuary for me it will be like tis, fore nothings can hurt me.

A poem explaining a transformed label ' A New You ' with neoteric logos after a change. You have eloborated the post shift patterns very woderfully with a preview of calmness, liberty, self-determination and ecstasy.It seems to have shifted the behaviourly trends and wanting the concerned one to recognize the new settings.....10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

This poem is beautifully put together, awesome visuals and ever so relaxing, I only found I wanted so much more of it.A scene of tranquility. Beautiful a10

this poem touched my heart its really good well done. kizzy

Great poem! Yes, we should all stop and take time to smell the flowers of life's natural beauties. A ten given here. God bless all poets-MJG.

What a wonderful, uplifting poem Fay to cheer the heart on a wet winter's morn. Best wishes, Andrew

A very excellent poem for its message that is easy to pick up-- having a partner who is a yoga teacher its liken to a yoga lesson in words for the last line says it all in meditation 'Your a relaxed and happy new you', regards uavniceday' Thankyou for your kind comments

Yes, when beset by the 'blues', the best way to aim for the garden of 'pinks' is to go down memory lane and stop at every beautiful place on the way to ruminate upon the joys we had once drawn therefrom. A very inspiring poem with healing properties. The rhyme scheme of abccbd used for all the stanzas is also very interesting - somewhat resembling the structure of a Rondeau. This poem is very much to my liking and earns a ten from me.

Thanks for sharing Fay. nice writing By the way..I need a new ME......Tried re-inventing myself but the original version kept bursting out of the bag...Can't decide whether the bag was too tight or too slack..Like your view that we fail to see some of the things that are really close. If we slow down enough to see them we may wonder at their simple beauty. Best Sid xx

dear Fay, hats off to you. In each new breath we have new life, Forget old breath and with it its strife. CP

Yes! i feel that confidence, each morning when i walk i hear woodpidgeions singing and i hear the mina's talk i feel the coolnest of the bush, the filtering sun above but most of all i feel, a kin with those i love my dear Fay! i raise my hat! good on you girl!

Lovely is the form, lovely is the content. So love it and added 10.