Thursday, January 1, 2015

A New Year For The Poor Comments

Rating: 5.0

Though we make the most of New Year's Day,
Smiles stand far from some in dark,
For us it's the time to make the hay,
Yet for some this day leaves no mark.
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Saheb Mohapatra
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Rajesh Thankappan 03 January 2015

You have very beautifully depicted the chasm that exist between the rich and the poor and this also shows your sensitivity towards the various ills that plague our society. Well written. 10/10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 January 2015

Great compassion shown here for the less fortunate ones......Saheb.......very well penned with compassionate words......great thought and great poem with rhythm and rhyme.....10

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Valsa George 02 January 2015

You have beautifully drawn the darker side of life when on one side the festivities of New Year are in full swing! There are people who crave for a square meal while many others splurge in luxury! We have to be aware of this and extend our generosity to the deprived! Great poem!

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Saheb Mohapatra

Saheb Mohapatra

Odisha, India
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