Sunday, January 3, 2016

A New Year? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I knew that you would come,
we've been waiting for so long;
to see your face, to hear your voice,
break out its new found song.
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dave lessard
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Lorraine Colon 04 January 2016

Time marches on, the year changes. But will our hearts be changed? May the corruption and inhumanity cease. May we become tolerant of each other's differences. May love replace hatred. May sharing replace greed. Then we can truly declare a happy new year. Your poem gives voice to the concerns many of us have. Well written, Dave.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 January 2016

Beautiful poem drawing a thin line between past year and new year. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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