Tuesday, May 31, 2005

A New Way~ Comments

Rating: 2.8

I've had enough
I've come undone
now every little thing's become
a trouble to attend to
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Adryan Barnathan
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Lamont Palmer 23 August 2006

Very intense poem, Adrienne. It moved me. -LP

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Anjana Aravind 16 May 2006

This is a most common feeling.... You gave it nice wording... good poem Adrienne.

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Brian Dorn 29 April 2006

Adrienne, good write! I can certainly relate, I know what it's like to grow tired of waiting for the right time. A very liberating poem... nice job! Brian

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Beautiful, if you ask me. Wonderful. I don't know how to describe it.

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