A New Way To Fly Comments

Hmm...makes one think. I like this one. It is very neat the way it rolls off the tongue. The theme is also very recognizably significant. The first stanza is my favorite. Good stuff, little lady.

very wonderful. i feel the rebirth of the body through spent time and money. very good. outstanding

Well done! Some vivid imagery indeed - 'They line up at night time at the bar' 'Now bluebirds are all that they are' And for sure as you write- 'They'll leave it behind As soon as they find A new way to fly'

awesome poem, good wording too