Wednesday, March 28, 2018

A New Vision Of Life Comments

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Lost in the open desert
My feet were burning bare
to assure it is not a nightmare
I Looked for some water
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Houda Boukassoula
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 April 2018

Lost in the open desert Between death and life I knew the value of life I will have to save What I need is attitude... these are the expressions of a struggling heart.... very well described taking desert as the symbol of the pain of the heart and thoughts....... very fine poem. tony

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Houda Boukassoula 04 April 2018

I am elated with your insightful comment.Thank you very much dear poet

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