A New Start Comments

''''I would walk a thousand miles or two Cuz, Hunny, you are my heart And I cant wait til a new start'''............this line is really fine, good writer, , , thanks

i really like this! i feel the same way about my lil sis. id be nothing without her =]

I wish I had a sissy...I only got 2 knuckle head bros! NO fair!

A perfect new start. A poem with outpourings of an afectionate heart and a promise of shield of protection to little sister. Everything in the poem flows so naturally and perfectly. You start with a bang. Congrats.

A truly lovely and loving dedication to your sister. Wish I had this kind of relationship with mine. Cherish every moment.

beautifully written good job

Cute, seems well structured and the feelings are there... Good write...