Sunday, January 1, 2012

A New Start Comments

Rating: 4.3

The water licked down my back
as it gave birth to the purity
of a new year it aided the love
and tears the pain and fears
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Robert Roberts
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Shaun Cronick 01 April 2020

Congratulations on being chosen with this fine poem. Truly deserved and thank you for writing and sharing. I wish you the best this life has to offer. Take care and the loved ones around you.

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Lyn Paul 01 April 2020

The adrenaline can achieve great things particularly in sport. Especially With the crowds excitement for the game. Thank you. Sorry your poem has been criticised by someone uninterested in PH just someone who needs to find his own way in life.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2020

as my momentum begins to flow goals to be achieved as the slate is wiped clean as i start over again...... touching inscription with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the member poem of the poem of the day for third time

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Chinedu Dike 01 April 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings on the New Year resolution. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 April 2020

Beautiful poem penned on the new year and it's changing resolution..congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Somali Mukherjee 01 April 2020

Congratulations on being the poem of the day. Thank you for sharing such a nice poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 April 2020

The water licked down my back as it gave birth to the purity of a new year it aided the love and tears the pain and fears.. very poetic are you dear poet. fine. thank u. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 April 2019

Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 April 2019

" Momentum begins to flow" ., Excellent expressions. Congrats on poem of the Day.

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Michael Morris 01 April 2019

This poem definitely needs A NEW START and A COMPLETE REWRITE!

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Michael Morris 01 April 2019

The word 'I' should always be capitalized.

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Michael Morris 01 April 2019

3am should be 3 a.m. (or) 3 A.M. 3 a.m. in the morning is redundant, since there is no 3 a.m. in the afternoon.

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Michael Morris 01 April 2019

over came should be one word, not two. moon lit should also be just one word.

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Michael Morris 01 April 2019

Congratulations for having the computer blindly pick your poem on the same day two years in a row. It also happened yesterday and will probably happen again tomorrow. It means that the head honchos at Poem Hunter are all on vacation at the same time..

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Kevin Patrick 01 April 2019

Every New Year is a chance to make promise to oneself for improvements, its that hope that makes it important to continue. Well deserved poem of the day!

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Prabir Gayen 01 April 2019

Fine poem to be selected as poem of the day....congrats.

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Susan Lacovara 01 April 2019

To bravely syep inti the promise if a new year, obe iften has to leave certain things behind, curbside, to ensure the lightening of the load. A beautiful piece, reminding us all of the triumph of moving forward. Co gratulations on being sekected as Member poem of the day. Well justified, fellow poet!

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The optimistic outlook on life has beautifully been expressed. Congrats

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Aqua Flower 01 April 2019

Congratulations, Robert for POD. A very hopeful and meaningful write.

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Tom Allport 01 April 2019

A positive write for a new start.

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