Each life is a blessing that doesn't last long,
And ends all too suddenly it all seems so wrong,
Yet hope keeps me going through all of my pain,
That one day I can be with you once again,
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Not a poem but a whole hour of melancholy feeling! How one misses his part who has departed! The reality of pain and the finality of time! The loved one could have been anyone, as I felt, It is my father. Andrew drew my tears! yours placidly,
A masterly composition. This poem has everything profoundness, depth, lovely play of words, touching feelings and a reasonable ending. my 10
this truly suggests SHELLEY's lines 'Our sweetest songs are those which Tell the saddest thought'
Andrew I was blown away with this one, as it really says it all, your choice of words are excellent and one can tell this came from within your heart....... Very sad, but in ones own way a tribute....... Bonnie Collins
You put alot of emphasis on the emotion that goes into your writing Andrew This is a superb piece! ! Love duncan X
This one had me in tears Andrew, I lost my husband just over a year ago and I found myself writing poem of a similar nature. They were a great way of letting my sorrow out. This is super, so meaningful and poignant. Great write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
True love for all eternity, in life and death.. forever plus one day.. This was absolutely beautiful.. Andrew.. brought tears to my eyes.. Losing one you love is never easy.. but to feel them in your heart everyday is love's gift forever... HugsWendy